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Before~

The comfort of the creamy curd rice
Rolling on the floor , watching TV
Using Laika as my squishy pillow
Sleeping through life
And moving in my own jolly pace

Reminiscing about a happier childhood
With the same bunch of friends ,
Dipping Fries on cheese
Unbothered about kilos and hours

Driving on my scooty ,
Wind washing away my starting jitters ,
Sitting with my special friend on the cool mud
Of  my Bessie beach ,
And trying to tell him that
The Big Things in Life are actually Very Small



The montage that passes through your eyes
Before any nerve wracking moment is
A Random rhapsody of your lived moments ,
So live your life friend
Like the waves before us
Rise and crash and touch some lives ~
Mistakes make great stories
Worry only about being true to your self.

He smiled a quiet smile
Placed his hands behind my head
Leaned forward
And shut my mouth in his style



What was I saying again?

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  1. What a delightful way to be silenced ... so delightful one loses one's train of thought, being true one's self all the way!

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  2. What a glorious poem this is and how easy to enter it and be a hidden onlooker as it happens.

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  3. These are all extraordinary moments of life really. It's our loss if we can't recognize them. And of course your closing lines are just as beautiful.

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    1. Thank you. Challenges like these open my eyes to them!

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  4. Both wise and delightful. And of course his action indicated that he both heard and heeded the advice!

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    1. Thank you! I am a big fan of your work , so this makes it extra special! :)

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  6. Wow, what profound lines!

    Before any nerve wracking moment is
    A Random rhapsody of your lived moments ,
    So live your life friend

    Thank you for this extraordinary write.

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  7. The montage that passes through your eyes
    Before any nerve wracking moment is
    A Random rhapsody of your lived moments ,
    So live your life friend
    Like the waves before us
    Rise and crash and touch some lives

    Sigh.. gorgeous!!❤️

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  8. What a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. So lovely! The flow the words,lines are all so wonderful! This has to be one of the best poems I have read. Take care
    Thank you so much for sharing my post'To a sailor in the sea' on your fb page.I am forever grateful :)

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    1. I share anything which i love reading :) and thank you so much.

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  9. Wow - this is stunning - the flow, the pace, the ideas, and images you've presented and created, the lines and wording itself - it is simply gorgeous - clearly written from the heart and it resonates with an intimate yet very universal feeling. It's breath-taking and stellar - I read this again and again and I feel like the heavens - the stars and constellations have opened before me - and are showering me with a grace and beauty that speaks of -a channel flowing of Love.

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    1. I've never felt better about my writing :)

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  10. This was really nice writing! Different style and much appreciated! Thanks for sharing :)

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